This is the third draft to our trailer and we tried to make changes to make the relationship with Jack more clear as well as Ava's illness as she stops attending school with Izzy. We did not feel there was much we could do with the footage we had so we just added a voiceover saying "And with my best friend and his sister confined at home, it was just me and Jack." I felt that this helped to show Ava starts to keep to herself and leaves Izzy lonely, especially with it being after the voiceover saying her illness affects her. The following clips also show Izzy and Jack together, and this hopefully tells the narrative that because it is just those two, they start to become closer.
Unfortunately the audio quality is different to the other voiceover and they do not sound similar, making it seem less professional.
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