Fourth Draft

Since our last draft, we made improvements to the second voiceover by re-recording it in the same room as we did the first one so that the audio quality was the same. We also added an inter title of "a story about illness, loneliness and misplaced friendships" and moved around and added clips so that these fell on moments that were relevant to the inter title. For example as you can see in this preview there is a clip of Izzy spinning and it says "and misplaced friendships" hinting that Izzy betrays her friendship with Ava.